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Killing Blow
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
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Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 09:13:57 AM in AEST
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To pierce the matter,
My pen is my dagger;
I use it to stab you with words
To leave you wounded,
Unable to recover ------
Forever robbed of life.
Copyright ©
JakerBaker88
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2010-04-30 09:13:57]
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Re: Killing Blow
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by aliopterix on
Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 09:20:08 AM AEST
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| The power of the pen etc., nice write. Aliopterix. |
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Re: Killing Blow
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by UnknownLegend on
Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 03:52:16 PM AEST
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I think everyone has a reason why they write poetry, a song or even a book .... for me it's an outlet My mind gets so cluttered with things that if I don't write about them my brain might explode.... at least it feels that way.
I always told my daughter, "Words are powerful and if you have a good vocabulary the best way to get back at someone is to say what you have to say and as you're walking away, you left them scratching their head trying to figure out if they been insulted or complemented .....then you accomplished what you set out to do"
What ever your reason is to write ....I figure if you got someone to think ... then you accomplished what you set out to do. This revealed a lot about you.... so I guess you got me to think .... now I gotta rest my brain...lol Very succinct and to the point ...........! |
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Re: Killing Blow
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st May 2010 @ 11:59:57 PM AEST
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Exactly!!!!  |
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Re: Killing Blow
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by Breezy on
Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 03:38:04 AM AEST
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ouch!!
Straight and to the point! I SO love this!!! :) Excellent
post JB. Words do have enormous power. Well done!
Really exceptional post! -- Achelois
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