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Burn To Rise
Contributed by
eshine
on
Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 10:54:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Bleeding
Sometimes my eyes bleed
To the verge of eruption
Like a volcano
No, never let it out
Just keep it inside
Safely behind the shelf
Of knowing,
Suffering
Suffer and suffer
Is my name
No one knows,
No one will
Selfishly
Its all mine
Sweet secrets
Till the grave,
Until my eyes bleed
To the end
Illusions,
When pain bares no more
When it no longer consumes
My living flesh,
There no more
And there it is
Happens behind the scenes
When the candles had
Their last dance on the to of my head
Last breath
And I finally go,
I slip into the land
A land of nothing
A land of eternity
There my secrets
Set sail
To serenity
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Re: Burn To Rise
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 1st May 2010 @ 12:30:00 AM AEST
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| i often get the imagery of eyes that are bleeding, powerful imagery as maybe the soul is broken, therefore the silent suffering,pain expressed from the heart and yet beautifully so, |
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