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You Are The Rain
Contributed by
DoubleS
on
Saturday, 1st May 2010 @ 06:34:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The rain it relaxes me
Like the sound of your voice
Surrenders me helpless
Do I really have a choice
Just like when Im in the rain
And I feel that cold chill
I turn around to find you
Laying down on the hill
I come over to join you
And you ask me to sit
As I start sitting I fall
Just as luck would have it
But I fall into my world
The same world as before
But it seems somewhat different
As the rain starts to pour
This is not the world I knew
Its not like in my dream
All the sudden in the distance
I hear a fainted scream
I start to run towards it
With the rain hitting my face
I then stop and realize
What is this strange and weird place
Then the screaming disappears
Like whispers in the wind
As you appear before me
Within the light that blinds
When my vision returned
You are holding out your hand
And you say Come with me
And I took hold of your hand
As I pass through the time
From the past to the present
Memories of you and me
Points out what my world meant
It meant that I love you
With every beat of my heart
You are the rain that thrills me
Throughout every body part.
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For the original My World poem go to my page and look at the 1st two poems (just for information on what I meant by the lines "But I fall into my world" to "Its not like in my dream"
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Re: You Are The Rain
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jessi95 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 08:48:48 PM AEST
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| this is a very good poem i love it |
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Re: You Are The Rain
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by evah2121 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 10:46:31 AM AEST
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| I'm In love with this poem, It reminded me of someone special. Very great writing! |
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