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Last Words
Contributed by
hanasuru
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Saturday, 1st May 2010 @ 09:53:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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she penned them in her diary
the day before she died
about her thoughts and feelings
and all the things shed hide
on waves of washed out paper
that left open the book
with smears of blue frustration
that no one had mistook
the meaning on the pages
so painful from the start
it quivered in the body
and sunk inside the heart
the things she couldn't say
in life are said in death
the reason for her action
in this thing that she left
but now it is a mystery
from all the things that fell
but though the words have vanished
the salty pages tell
Copyright ©
hanasuru
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2010-05-01 21:53:09]
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Re: Last Words
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by aliopterix on
Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 12:46:25 AM AEST
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| Welcome to our site. I enjoyed your poem, evocative and moving. Look forward to more of the same. Aliopterix |
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Re: Last Words
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by Nevilleconnie on
Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 01:07:06 AM AEST
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| A heartbreaking, but very well written poem. Good job. |
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Re: Last Words
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 08:21:23 AM AEST
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beautifully written, excellent expression and flow, i look forward to seeing more from you, welcome to ypdc,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Last Words
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by windowguy on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 10:52:48 PM AEST
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| Well written piece on one of life's great tragedies. |
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Re: Last Words
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by Durango on
Friday, 15th September 2023 @ 07:56:04 AM AEST
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The things she couldn/'/t say
In life are said in death.
Powerful and memorable statement from a poem that encompasses both. |
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