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Eros Smiles
Contributed by
Breezy
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Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 02:24:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Midnight whispers to the stars
The magic of the sky is ours
Weve not the need for light of day
The sun but serves to chase away
All the eloquence of night
And burns us with her scorching light
Lovers praise the bleeding moon
Tis only she, could make them swoon
And beauty bathes in starlit skies
That with the dawn, grows faint and dies
But here inside the nighttime lure
Where dreams are dreamt and can endure
My lovers kiss, my soul beguiles
Our hearts fly free, and Eros smiles
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Breezy
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2010-05-02 02:24:24]
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Re: Eros Smiles
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by windowguy on
Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 02:39:55 AM AEST
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| Powerfully romantic piece. Well done. |
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Re: Eros Smiles
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 06:47:24 AM AEST
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| My lover's kiss, my soul beguiles, our hearts fly free,and Eros smiles, not the only one smiling after reading this,just beautiful, |
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Re: Eros Smiles
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by duff on
Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 07:46:28 AM AEST
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The night offers so many aspects that are full of romance and magic and again, you have captured the mood in such a beautiful way. Your imagery always finds a street of enchantment for the reader to stroll down. Delicate and full of heart this is a splendid write that brought a smile. Well done.
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Re: Eros Smiles
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 08:39:28 AM AEST
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truly beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Eros Smiles
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by aliopterix on
Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 10:35:23 AM AEST
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| Absolutely wonderful piece of writing. Fantastic.Aliopterix. |
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Re: Eros Smiles
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 12:44:12 AM AEST
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Eros smiles indeed. He is probably also saying to himself, "this is what my poetry would be made of", if he wrote poetry. Yeah, that's the stuff!!!  |
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Re: Eros Smiles
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by emystar on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 02:37:22 AM AEST
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This is a magic, beautiful write.
I luv it.
smiles,
emy |
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Re: Eros Smiles
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by elle on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 06:55:14 AM AEST
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| Great stuff! This is just a loving cup of smiles. elle :) |
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