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If I could write a poem
Contributed by
unknownlegend
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Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 04:42:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If I could write a poem, use all the words I knew It would be oh so long, imagine how it grew The words would be oh so sweet and strike at your hearts chord your mind ... it would be mesmerized or maybe just plain bored I'd try to make it pretty ..... have all the words to rhyme it would take all my wit .... and surely all my time. Would I ever finish .... to give this poem to you or would I ramble on and on .... before I'd gotten through? To choose the perfect words, I may think and ponder what I really want to say .... you may even wonder A million verses I could write, from all these words to choose or maybe stop it at one line and just say "I love you"
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Re: If I could write a poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 04:47:44 PM AEST (User
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excellent write, thoroughly enjoyed it, perfect ending,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: If I could write a poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by 619Prisoner on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 04:48:50 PM AEST (User
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If i could reply
to this lovlely write,
it would take me at least
until late at night
for i would list all the words
that i forgot to use
in my previous poems
that you could amuse
then i would continue about
the words l love you
for they are so small
yet so very true.
you wrote a good poem
this you should know
i shall stop my rambling
for now i will go |
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Re: If I could write a poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by northernlights on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 12:15:36 AM AEST (User
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wickedly amusing lol |
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Re: If I could write a poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by Nevilleconnie on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 06:11:09 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful, Beautiful poem. Loved everything about it. |
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