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Gift Of Love
Contributed by
Nevilleconnie
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Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 02:35:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Everything around me fades, whenever you are near.
All my doubts just fade away. Im left without a care.
I never thought Id find the day, where I might want to live.
So much changed when you leaned in, and let me feel your kiss.
Brand new doors have opened up, I find that I cant wait.
To walk through every single one, as long as your in wake.
I never want to leave your side, pathetic as it seems.
Only you can make me feel so whole, and so complete.
I only hope to give you halve of what youve given me.
With everything youve ever done, your way to hard to beat.
How can I compete with you? A man who saved my soul.
Nothing I can ever do, compares with your bestowal.
All that I can think to do is write you poems of love.
Even though its not that much, I pray that its enough.
Ill always try to give you more, cause thats what you deserve.
You say my love is all you need, the rest is just absurd.
Maybe, yes, your words are true. In fact I know for sure.
Still I find I have to give you everything and more.
Your asking me to please just stop. Enjoy the love we share.
Your telling me that loves a gift that can not be compared.
Maybe nows the time to stop. And do just what you said.
Enjoy this love well always share until my final breath.
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Nevilleconnie
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2010-05-04 14:35:35]
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Re: Gift Of Love
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 02:54:02 PM AEST
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such a pretty flowing poem, so full of love, great write!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Gift Of Love
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by UnknownLegend on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 09:33:03 PM AEST
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| There's a lot of emotion here and it really comes thru. I really like the change in direction you taken with this poem. Write on my friend. |
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