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~Gentle Comes The Night~
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 10:37:14 PM in AEST
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Gentle comes the night once more
Raindrops softly tumbling down.
Night owns me in her sweet serenade
The trees dressed in their lovely gowns.
Gentle comes the night once more
Soft whispering sighs in the dark.
No moon, no stars, just brisk peaceful calm
As the rain drops gently fall round.
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shelby
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2010-05-04 22:37:14]
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Re: ~Gentle Comes The Night~
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by Debris on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 02:45:25 AM AEST
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| I really like the simplicy of this, which in itself has a sadness or gentleness that I can't quite put my finger on. Very good. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: ~Gentle Comes The Night~
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by Breezy on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 04:41:17 AM AEST
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Exquistiely delicate. Nighttime has many
mistresses it seems ... :)
-- Achelois |
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Re: ~Gentle Comes The Night~
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by Nevilleconnie on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 08:25:57 AM AEST
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| It's amazing how you put such great detail into such a short poem. Beautifully written. |
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Re: ~Gentle Comes The Night~
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 09:33:18 AM AEST
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beautiful and serene, makes my heart feel peaceful, i'm happy to see you my friend,
woofies, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: ~Gentle Comes The Night~
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by wordmusefindme on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 10:51:15 AM AEST
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i'm with you there in the dark
with the cool mist glazing the trees
the quiet calm soothes the spirit
and the rain renews the earth life
thanks for sharing the great words all
"trees dressed" "soft wispering sighs"
i wonder where all the birds are during that dark evening shower. i've noticed their silence |
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Re: ~Gentle Comes The Night~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 11:32:46 AM AEST
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It's hot and muggy today and I'm too cheap to run the air conditioner. However, I like to sleep when it peacefully rains at night. Now I'm sleepy, relaxed and comfortable. That's great writing my dear.
So where the hell you been?
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Re: ~Gentle Comes The Night~
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 6th May 2010 @ 09:31:42 PM AEST
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Oh Celle, that's gentle, and kind with calmness of mind. I really felt comforted by your words this time.
I love the rain at night, it soothes an old soul.
So glad to be reading your loverly words again.
Warm love
consue |
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Re: ~Gentle Comes The Night~
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by UnknownLegend on
Tuesday, 11th May 2010 @ 10:53:36 PM AEST
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| This poem puts one in a quiet peaceful sort of limbo, knowing eventually you must leave yet, wanting forever to stay. I guess serenity is a bliss sometimes best enjoyed alone. Thank you for this articulate description of a wonderful place. Beautiful is all I can say my friend. Write on Michelle. Always my best to you ...david |
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Re: ~Gentle Comes The Night~
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by deusdeira on
Saturday, 25th December 2010 @ 06:23:43 AM AEST
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| a beautiful poem :) |
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