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Drowning in the Desert
Contributed by
jecox
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Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 11:10:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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The desert rises high.
I cant see past the sand.
I cant hear past the waves.
Will I drown in the fear?
If I fall, will you hear?
Kill my insides, turn them red.
Stop the pain, I want to be dead.
The dunes encompass my visage.
The openness shrinks into nothing.
The dirt fills my soul.
I want to take control.
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Re: Drowning in the Desert
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by iodinelove on
Wednesday, 9th June 2010 @ 08:17:18 PM AEST
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Great job, Thanks for the read.
Always, abraham
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