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Please Don't Forget
Contributed by
DayLilly
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Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 09:03:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The tummy flies are here again
Your kiss sends me into a daze
Ive never forgotten since then
When you set my sad heart ablaze
Your touch is all that I desire
Your smile forever in my brain
Your eyes made my heart rewire
I think I could just go insane
Only for you my heart will crave
Please do not end it here and now
The pain would send me to my grave
The dark would eat me up like chow
I still love you, please dont forget
And I always will, dont you fret
<3DayLilly
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2010-05-05 21:03:22]
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Re: Please Don't Forget
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 6th May 2010 @ 12:16:20 AM AEST
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beautifully written, i love your line the dark would eat me up like chow lol, creative and clever you,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Please Don't Forget
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by Nevilleconnie on
Thursday, 6th May 2010 @ 12:38:22 PM AEST
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| I loved the flow of this poem. It's very beautiful. Great job. Hope to read more from you. |
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