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in the shroud
Contributed by
wazarov
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Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A new day is already gone
and here you are in your own
trust no more the silence in the sky
cause no one can tell when you gonna die
you have to leave someday
but not by my hand
and I cant make you understand
cause it hurts so bad
when I see you in your shroud
I feel like mad and god is bad
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wazarov
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2003-04-14 05:35:00]
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Re: in the shroud
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by shelby on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 09:56:26 AM AEST
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This is also another great poem.
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Re: in the shroud
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by AngryPrincess on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 12:06:40 AM AEST
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great job once again, i love it... :O)
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Re: in the shroud
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 08:02:38 AM AEST
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Loved this, Dean... well except for the last line..
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