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Hurdles
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Thursday, 6th May 2010 @ 12:48:14 PM in AEST
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Hurdles
Moving forward with the knowledge that life will always place hurdles in our path.
I look back to the start of this incredible journey and know there is still much further to go.
With every conversation we share.
I absorb each word that you breathe into the air.
Expressing before there were deeper things, vitally important besides sexual contact.
The transfer of energy and emotions from something as simple as holding hands or wrapping your arms around someone, is like the roots of a flower seeking the nutrients that feed it life itself.
The events of the past week have fueled the fire in the deepest reaches of my soul.
I would die a thousand deaths if they never came with the pain that tears through the heart when denied love.
The touch of your skin, the smell of your hair and the feeling of your arms around me is something I have spent many nights dreaming about.
Today as I walked in the sun, I could feel you there with me.
Life does not happen by chance. It happens by design.
Hold true to the faith that you are to be in mine.
Deadwriter
05/06/2010
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Re: Hurdles
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 6th May 2010 @ 01:05:31 PM AEST
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sounds surely you are blessed, beautiful write my friend,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Hurdles
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by shelby on
Thursday, 6th May 2010 @ 08:24:31 PM AEST
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Oh my friend this made me say a deep ahhhhh. Beautiful!
Hugs
Shall |
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Re: Hurdles
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by Breezy on
Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 08:42:09 AM AEST
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oh WOW!!! How amazing this is!! I love it! This is
just busting at the seems with romance and a
declaration of devotion that most only get to dream
about. How enormous this is! I have spent a life
time searchng for moments that take my breath away.
And this? This is most definitely one of them.
Excellent, EXCELLENT write!! -- Achelois
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