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Determination
Contributed by
windowguy
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Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 12:42:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Hanging on
A thin bending stem
A little bumblebee
Refuses to fall.
Wind blows stronger,
Even tighter he clings,
Determined not to lose.
Tenacity is rewarded
As he buries his head
Within the crimson heart
Of a delicate rose
And extracts
The sweetest
Richest, golden nectar.
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windowguy
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2010-05-07 12:42:07]
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Re: Determination
(User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 08:16:35 PM AEST
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I am in absolute awe! You painted a beautiful picture of determination with your gift of words. I can see the bumblebee clinging on and enjoying his reward. Great poem!
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Re: Determination
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 8th May 2010 @ 01:39:06 AM AEST
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| Determination for every creature including man on this earth is well rewarded lovely poem |
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