|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Living In The Real World
Contributed by
Nevilleconnie
on
Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 06:17:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
Im feeling really lonely, so I thought Id write this poem.
Ive never felt so empty, so confused, and all alone.
I said I wouldnt think of them. The friends I use to have.
In the end they let me down, and left me feeling sad.
Even though there was a point, they gave to me some joy.
Soon enough they walked away, abandoned there new toy.
I guess I have a neon sign that sits atop my head.
It reads that Im a loser who cant find a trusting friend.
Romance, love, is even worse. It leaves an ache inside.
I gave my heart just once in life. A foolish girl was I.
He seemed the perfect prince for me. So noble and so strong.
In my life I can not say Ive ever been more wrong.
The outer shell was all I seen. The inside was a mess.
Though maybe I am just as bad. I am, I must confess.
I have to put away these books where happy endings live.
I have to grow up. Nows the time. I cant remain a kid.
Maybe if I read some books where things dont turn out well.
Maybe Id be less surprised when good things turn to hell.
Romeo and Juliet, a book I never liked.
There happy ending wasnt there. I cast the book aside.
Maybe though, I should read books where things dont turn out great.
Maybe nows the time to start. I hope Im not to late.
And though I know I shouldnt read these fairytales no more.
Why than do I feel so lost, as I now close this door?
Copyright ©
Nevilleconnie
... [
2010-05-07 18:17:19]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Living In The Real World
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 11:21:37 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Living in the real world sucks! YEA!
I felt every word of this.
Such a flowing verse, well done.
I say we should write our own ending, what do you think?
Hugs you
Michelle |
|
|
Re: Living In The Real World
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sheveg on
Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 09:51:06 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I can identify with your poem. I still think that it is okay to dream and have fantasies of happy endings. It doesn't always turn out well, but sometimes it does. Don,t give up hoping. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
