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Mistake
Contributed by
Nevilleconnie
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Saturday, 8th May 2010 @ 06:26:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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No matter how I do the math, the answers still the same.
1+0=1, and that will never change.
I lost my chance at finding love, that day I said goodbye.
Though I didnt it know it than, I loved you more than life.
Now that I am left alone, I find that Im the fool.
I wish there were a time machine to take me back to you.
Staring at your picture now, I find that I was blind.
How could I not see the love that shined within you eyes?
Nothing ever makes me cry, the way these memories do.
Theres not a night I fall asleep, and do not dream of you.
And though these dreams are vivid, yes. I know that there not real.
I wonder why I even try to find a way to deal.
Tempting is the thought of death. A reverie from pain.
Better that than live a life where I dont see your face.
Knowing you will not forgive the way I let you down.
Solidifies the choice I made to end my life rite now.
I cant go on another day without you being near.
The pain would be to much to take. Itd be to much to bare.
Im sorry that I let you down in oh so many ways.
Im sorry that I turned away the love you freely gave.
Ive taken all the pills I have. And soon my breath will cease.
Its hard to make out anything. My visions getting weak.
As I take my final breath I clearly see your face.
As I take my final breath, I die with my mistake.
Copyright ©
Nevilleconnie
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2010-05-08 18:26:44]
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Re: Mistake
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Saturday, 8th May 2010 @ 11:36:19 PM AEST
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Well I hope this is just exceptionally good writing 'cause you convinced me that it's real.
I'm sorry for your mistake but if we all committed suicide for each mistake there would be no one left on this planet.
Take care and hang tuff.
Blessings, prayer,
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Re: Mistake
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by LandsleyAlexandre on
Sunday, 5th September 2010 @ 05:03:29 AM AEST
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| cool poem |
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