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DON'T
Contributed by
chrisdavid
on
Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 12:02:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Don't fake a smile
If you're really sad
Don't say it's good
If you think that it is bad
Don't pretend
You can't hear what I say
Please don't end your life this way
Don't shed a tear
If you do not care
Don't say you're close
If you are already there
Don't look back
To those yesterdays
Please don't end your life this way
You've done some wrongs but you've been strong
You've played the perfect game
I know your heart's been ripped apart
You cannot start again
Don't make a promise
That you cannot keep
Don't say you're tired
If you will not sleep
Don't think the hurt
Can be kept at bay
Please don't end your life this way
Don't give up
I'm not sure you'll try
Don't say 'Hello'
If you mean 'Goodbye'
Is this the end?
Because you're in decay
Please don't end your life this way
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Re: DON'T
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by northernlights on
Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 03:37:51 AM AEST
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| Don't fake a smile if you're really sad so often so difficult to show real feelings when society preaches a sermon of happiness, caring heartfelt write |
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Re: DON'T
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by nobodyJQ on
Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 04:44:26 AM AEST
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call a spade a spade, Don't make a promise u can't keep.
So true Dave...
Keep it up. |
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Re: DON'T
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by Nevilleconnie on
Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 09:21:26 AM AEST
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| This was such a heartbreaking, yet beautifully written poem. Very emotional. Great job. |
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Re: DON'T
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by BLUESOUL1313 on
Wednesday, 12th May 2010 @ 02:00:23 AM AEST
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i have done quite a few of the don't s in your poem.
and i am still not proud of them. |
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