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A Walk In The Ocean
Contributed by
annie
on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Walking barefoot along the lonely stretch of sand,
Holding my dress up, my shoes in my hand,
To keep the rising waters from getting me so wet,
There were a few others out that I had not met.
The setting sun was orange mixed with clouds dark gray,
As it met the ocean they became one far,far away,
I was mesmerized by this gorgeous view,
For just one moment I forgot all about you.
Along this long stretch of beach tall sea grass grew,
The great dunes hid me from anyone I knew,
Now I could cry,my tears to replace my smile,
Like rain drops falling gently on the evening tide.
Without thinking I walked into the ocean my shoes on the shore,
My mind was telling me to keep going and I would be sad no more,
The water was rising fast soon to take me out to sea,
But a voice I knew seemed to be shouting something at me.
Just before I went under never to rise again,
I felt someone reaching as they caught me by the hand,
You carried me to safety and when I opened my eyes,
My love had returned to me,you I idolize.
Today when I walk barefoot along the sandy beach,
My tears are gone,to touch you I just take my hand and reach..
2003
AggieAnne
Copyright ©
annie
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2003-04-14 13:05:00]
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Re: A Walk In The Ocean
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 07:06:18 PM AEST
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| Annie, this is a most beautiful and touching write! It paints such a wonderful picture in my mind. You are an incredibly talented poet. Larry |
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