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Contributed by
paul427
on
Friday, 14th May 2010 @ 01:54:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A purple tune seated on a whiff of air
(The answer to my prayer)
Turned the dull evening in my minds city
To a bright morning in the wilderness, so pretty:
Exotic birds sang, wild flowers blossomed
The fresh spring air even brought to life
Wasted plants, previously forgotten
Vivid colours mirrored from dew drops
A splendid rainbow created
To form the entrance for all of heavens beauty
The one for whom my world was painted:
YOU
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Re: You
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by Breezy on
Friday, 14th May 2010 @ 06:55:45 AM AEST
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Absolutely stunning!! This is just one of the most
beautifully romantic pieces I've read in a while.
Your excitement and emotion spill over each line;
every word. Welcome to YPDC and thanks for sharing.
Excellent post! -- Achelois
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