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Hummingbird
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Sunday, 16th May 2010 @ 08:23:19 PM in AEST
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Fluttering fairy,
iridescently costumed,
magic in its flight
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2010-05-16 20:23:19]
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Re: Hummingbird
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th May 2010 @ 02:27:44 AM AEST
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I think maybe the humming bird was pouting because it had not seen this haiku yet. Now it should be okay.
Look out the window
Hummingbird smiling at you
Heidi wrote her poem
Thank you for posting.
Tim |
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Re: Hummingbird
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by northernlights on
Monday, 17th May 2010 @ 05:21:45 AM AEST
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| Great visual description well done |
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Re: Hummingbird
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Wednesday, 19th May 2010 @ 01:24:23 AM AEST
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| i digg:) |
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Re: Hummingbird
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th May 2010 @ 02:02:30 AM AEST
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| Last night I dreamt that a hummingbird visited me and now I find this wonderful haiku. Why a hummingbird, is still a mystery, but a welcomed one. |
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