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shellshocked
Contributed by
guiltycircles
on
Monday, 17th May 2010 @ 05:22:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i sit here, where you left me
frozen as my life crumbles
the rubble piles up
slowly the oxygen slips away
my chest tightens, my heart slows
your love is no longer feeding it
no reason left to beat
the gleam off the metal
gives me hope
that this final act
will protect you and all others
from the poison that is my love
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guiltycircles
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2010-05-17 05:22:51]
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Re: shellshocked
(User Rating: 1 )
by Obnoxious_Bread on
Friday, 21st May 2010 @ 11:24:04 AM AEST
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You have some great imagery here, this poem really captures how it feels when something or someone blows up th foundations of one's happiness... for whatever reason. The title fits it most perfectly.
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