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waiting room rambling
Contributed by
LadyDama
on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 06:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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sitting here, sweaty palms
heart racing, i have some qualms
writing it out, pop a pill
how much longer do i climb this hill?
sick inside, my tummy hurts
heart is broken; my chest is burnt
sadness creeps, darkness falls
i don't seem to make any sense at all
what can i do, what can i say
to make this pain just go away
should i leave, should i go
should i forgive and take it slow?
so much anger built up inside
am i just a product of pride?
or am i justified in this abyss
is it love and honesty i miss?
help me please, someone see
what this illness is doing to me...
april 9, 2003
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LadyDama
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2003-04-14 18:45:00]
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Re: waiting room rambling
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 06:58:16 PM AEST
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| great poem and i think it's cute you shared with the doctor and in turn with us; and i do hope your feeling better soon too! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: waiting room rambling
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by Daydreamer on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 07:47:18 PM AEST
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| That was a good poem..I hope you are feeling better. :) ~Day~ |
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Re: waiting room rambling
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 09:36:57 PM AEST
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Lovely poem.... know the feeling...lol.. thanks for sharing and I hope you're better soon..
Jenni |
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Re: waiting room rambling
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 07:15:36 AM AEST
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good write..been there
Shari |
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Re: waiting room rambling
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by Butterat_Zool on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 01:21:02 PM AEST
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| This is awesome. Good thing you had your doctor handy to figger out what your illness was. Another great write from LadyDama. Keep them coming. Butterat Zool. |
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