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is it the sound...
Contributed by
omeoteotl
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Tuesday, 18th May 2010 @ 06:21:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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It is the sound
Of a bird
Or a word
That drifts
Tightly and
Holds
Everlasting
Fear mimics
The quiet
Silence in space
Then we break
Like glass slow
Motion
And confusing
Instant
Of reality
Thats unaware
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2010-05-18 18:21:01]
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Re: is it the sound...
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by duff on
Thursday, 20th May 2010 @ 10:33:41 PM AEST
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This is very abstract and it captivates the mind letting it wander to different places. There is a haunting tone inside your words that makes this an interesting read. Well done
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