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Poor Bedside Manner
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2010 @ 08:02:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Cold are the hands of Loneliness,
Smothering me in it's embrace
While its fingertips explore my body----
Carefully it examines me like a surgeon,
Dissecting every inch of my form
While I writhe in pain and discomfort----
No anesthesia to be found.
Copyright ©
JakerBaker88
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2010-05-18 20:02:32]
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Re: Poor Bedside Manner
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2010 @ 09:05:27 PM AEST
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| This was creepy (in a good way, of course). The intimate description was such a weird way to come at the concept. You wrote something unique :) Nicely done. |
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Re: Poor Bedside Manner
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th May 2010 @ 12:33:45 AM AEST
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I generally try not to read the other comments because I wish to form my own opinions without any other influence. However, I find myself agreeing completely with what fielding88 said because I found myself, this time, also reading his comment.
Me really likes this poem even though it seems really sad. |
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Re: Poor Bedside Manner
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by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 20th May 2010 @ 12:01:51 AM AEST
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similar to the concept of how supposedly "mind, heart, body and soul are one".... don't u feel like u and loneliness are one sometimes? well that's what i got after reading this, esp. from reading the 1st stanza... indeed this was something different and i enjoyed it
take care
-K.Z. |
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