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water
Contributed by
FreeStyle
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Wednesday, 19th May 2010 @ 05:21:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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the rain it pours outside my door
it lashes the window then spreads to the floor
pools it forms like mirrors to the sky
from wens it came the clouds so hight
it fills and spills trickles together
some from the trees some from the heather
gathering and joining pon hills and flats
it finds its self traveling paths
of old and new of slopes through
the genteles falls to the gapeing gill
slow and fast it meeanders past
towns and city feeding the vast
its journey no end no beggining
allways moving evere living
the blood of life of this planet
so drink up.
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Re: water
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by duff on
Thursday, 20th May 2010 @ 10:27:19 PM AEST
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A great write that flows like your subject from line to line. This is well written and thanks for sharing.
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