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Edge of Reason, Borderline of Insanity
Contributed by
ingeniusidiot
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Wednesday, 19th May 2010 @ 09:32:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Life has dealt a devastating hand
Just like lightning melting sand
Turning a once loving heart from flesh and blood to stone
Once caring for another, is now all alone
Now as bleeding feet upon the edge of reason stand
While scissors of pain and hatred cut loves final strand
With bloodshot eyes peering through an ocean of tears
Trying to make sense of all the lies and wasted years
2010
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ingeniusidiot
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2010-05-19 09:32:09]
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Re: Edge of Reason, Borderline of Insanity
(User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on
Wednesday, 19th May 2010 @ 11:24:37 AM AEST
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| Great write strong full of emotion,descriptive can feel the struggle and the pain |
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Re: Edge of Reason, Borderline of Insanity
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by PreciousKitten on
Wednesday, 19th May 2010 @ 08:06:59 PM AEST
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| this poem has got me in tears. i have enjoyed that much. plz keep writing. |
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Re: Edge of Reason, Borderline of Insanity
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by joe-joe on
Friday, 11th June 2010 @ 12:58:20 PM AEST
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| nice write...many times "life has dealt a devasting hand", but at end life has taught me how to stand... |
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