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Rain
Contributed by
savannah1085
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Wednesday, 19th May 2010 @ 10:10:56 AM in AEST
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NaturePoetry
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A teardrop; an angel's cry.
The way the angel feels,
Is cold, wet, and left alone.
The water goes with its meal.
It trickles downward, off a cloud,
Falling from the sky.
It plummets, 'till it hits the ground,
And then begins to dry.
The teardrop, is soon forgotten,
Lost, but never found.
The angel then lets off his tears,
Sadness, sucked into the ground.
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Re: Rain
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Thursday, 20th May 2010 @ 12:12:41 AM AEST
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| i really like this, got a serene an delicate kinda vibe. |
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Re: Rain
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by FlintHunter on
Monday, 12th September 2011 @ 04:35:11 PM AEST
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Rain is a gentle and tender poem; I think it must reflect YOU. What sweet sentiment covers the whole thing -- a joy to read!
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