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Love?
Contributed by
doyler94
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Wednesday, 19th May 2010 @ 05:31:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i just keep staring cant look away she is a vision of beauty in every single way if eyes are the window to the soul then ive seen heaven if a smile goes a long way then im in the artic This girl drives me crazy theres not much to say i think i love her in every kind way my eyes catch her beauty from across a crowed room that beauty like a flower just about to bloom there is one single problem that seems to come to mind she dosnt know i exsist i doubht im even her kind i dream about her day and night just looking at me the kinda way i look at her hoping she will set me free i feel ashamed of who i am whenever she is near i feel kinda werid as if im not even there insted im floating up high above judging myself and wondering.... am i in love i think about the days she smiles and talks to me and i laugh and smile so full of glee im still too young to know if love is what im feeling or maybe its my hormones looking for sexually healing
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Re: Love?
(User Rating: 1 ) by chrisdavid on
Wednesday, 19th May 2010 @ 11:57:37 PM AEST (User
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I liked this one. You sum up what you feel pretty well. Good write. |
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