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never enough
Contributed by
sek-c-shaun
on
Thursday, 20th May 2010 @ 11:03:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I tell you I love you, I tell you I care
I give you everything, nothing left to share
Sometimes you smile sometimes you laugh
I share with you everything, when you share half
Its never enough no matter what I do
Everything I have Ive given to you
Its never enough no matter what I say
I cant go on feeling this way
I say your beautiful I say youre the one
You say it back yet Im the only one
Doing the small things you love so much
Making an effort for your soothing touch
Its never enough no matter what I do
Everything I have Ive given to you
Its never enough no matter what I say
I cant go on feeling this way
Im sitting at home wishing I was with you
Wanting to make you happy the only way I knew
Your sitting at home thinking of what to do
Be with the one you used to love and maybe make it through
Its never enough no matter what I do
Everything I have Ive given to you
Its never enough no matter what I say
I cant go on feeling this way
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Re: never enough
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by elle on
Friday, 21st May 2010 @ 05:03:10 AM AEST
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Well I think it's good. I feel the repetiveness of every other stanza is almost like song lyrics.
A touchy subject, this one-sided love, but you carried it off quite well. Smiles~ elle |
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Re: never enough
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by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 22nd May 2010 @ 12:49:39 AM AEST
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| It was a very good poem. I like the emotion in it. it is from the heart |
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