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The Background
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Friday, 21st May 2010 @ 10:10:50 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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Contemplating thoughts, silence camouflages me, onlooker of life
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2010-05-21 22:10:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Background
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st May 2010 @ 11:44:42 PM AEST (User
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Me too. Yet here you shine!!! |
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Re: The Background
(User Rating: 1 ) by Breezy on
Saturday, 22nd May 2010 @ 07:15:52 PM AEST (User
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This really hits close to home. God, I ADORE the
second line. It's so affecting and harbours a quiet
sadness. Wonderfully done.
Excellent haiku! -- Achelois
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Re: The Background
(User Rating: 1 ) by northernlights on
Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 07:19:05 AM AEST (User
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Its an enviable position being in the background as you can watch people like me make a fool of themselves lol seriously there is so much wisdom and learning in observing well written |
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Re: The Background
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 11:13:17 AM AEST (User
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There's nothing better than watching life unfold before your very eyes.
You see the good and bad, and you can learn so much from doing just that.
I can relate to this a lot. Well done as always!
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: The Background
(User Rating: 1 ) by spud on
Tuesday, 25th May 2010 @ 12:07:44 PM AEST (User
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Hi,
Once again so much said in so few words.
The 3 L's ...... Look, Listen, and Learn.
Tommy
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