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Verbose
Contributed by
Nova
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Saturday, 22nd May 2010 @ 11:02:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Poetic... poetry, only words
cannot contain the things
I wish to express
They are a lesser form
a scratching at the
surface of the Whole
The vibrating mass
of energy, cradling me
and being cradled
Silence
speaks so well
it is so Verbose.
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Nova
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2010-05-22 11:02:32]
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Re: Verbose
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by Obnoxious_Bread on
Wednesday, 26th May 2010 @ 07:08:07 PM AEST
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I feel ya man... sometimes I can be really inspired and the words just flow but more often than not its extremely hard to express the meat of things in words AND keep it poetic while you're at it...
I usually try to avoid that but sometimes I do have second thoughts about what I write a while after I do so because I feel I he only "scratched at the surface of the Whole, as you so accurately put it.
Thanks for sharing :D
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