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The ticking clock
Contributed by
FreeStyle
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Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 12:56:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Time caught me by the hand
And took me down a hill
I tried to turn and run away
But part lost my free will
It showed me pain showed me sorrow
Said this will come tomorrow
If you dont climb back up that hill you'll
Have to beg steal or borrow
I put my hands around times neck
And squeezed all so tight
I said you only exist to fill the pockets of the rich man
But not me to night
So cast away your clocks
And weapons of the cogged machine
Take your life by the hand
And do with it as you please
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Re: The ticking clock
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by fish on
Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 03:45:49 AM AEST
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I love your personification of time, and you did it so beautifully that unless one knows what a clock is, one will actually think you are referring to someone you had an encounter with.
i don't know why every poem that has rhyming lines tickles my fancy, but i just love pieces with rhymes. do i mean i love your poem? of course YES.
pretty work |
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Re: The ticking clock
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by rambo56 on
Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 04:07:04 AM AEST
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| love this poem good write |
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Re: The ticking clock
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Monday, 24th May 2010 @ 12:12:42 AM AEST
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enjoyed reading it,
i look forward to ya nxt one, anyway take care:)
Daylynn. |
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