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The Missing Piece
Contributed by
fish
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Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 05:30:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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From this deep sleep I woke
And found, when I move I choke
Again and again I tried but broke.
With this anguish I must put up my oak.
What do I this day feel,
Everything has turned troublingly still.
Fear grips me like with a hand of steel.
Now my instinct warns of an impending peril.
Amidst this wide sea of wealth, something is still amiss.
What, I wonder, is the missing piece?
My heart wanders abroad like a merchant of Venices
Who, despite his wealth, with vigour seeks peace.
The trouble, I found, is my missing rib
Lest I find a soul mate maynt be complete.
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2010-05-23 17:30:14]
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Re: The Missing Piece
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by elle on
Thursday, 3rd June 2010 @ 03:40:17 AM AEST
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| Ahhhh, nicely brought together. I like the surprise ending. elle :) |
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