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An Illusory Love
Contributed by
chrismil15
on
Monday, 24th May 2010 @ 10:55:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The moments pass by
As quickly as they came
My hand intertwined with yours;
The blissful moments so transcending.
Your smile, so alluring and contagious;
Your scent, so seductively intoxicating.
A laugh that I always relish;
That brings light to the somber day.
Such beauty; unearthly and enthralling,
Could trap any man under an inexorable spell.
The vivid moonbeam on your hair; So radiant and enrapturing.
Bewitches my soul in your tranquility.
Your soothing voice, so sublime and captivating;
Like the Sirens of Homers Odyssey.
Your lustrous skin in the moonlight;
Traps me in the trance that is your sumptuous beauty.
Your gleaming blue eyes entrap me;
In an overwhelming daze.
The way they glisten in the moonlight;
Sends chills of delirious joy through my body.
Must I bid farewell,
To this moment of serenity?
Where are you going? Come back!
To what name should I call you?
I am the woman of your dreams,
She replied; To which I awoke
And realized, This love; This woman;
None of this, is real.
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chrismil15
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2010-05-24 22:55:17]
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Re: An Illusory Love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th May 2010 @ 01:07:26 AM AEST
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Very descriptive. Perhaps someday it will be real.
I really like this poem. It brought back fond memories of someone I used to love (a part of me still does and always will) and a dream I had about her. She was real but the dream wasn't. Anyway, thanks. I enjoyed it.
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Tim
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Re: An Illusory Love
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by fish on
Tuesday, 25th May 2010 @ 02:39:35 AM AEST
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o men, you hit me real hard, that the sweetness is over whelming. the last two stanzas is the part i love more. and the suspense is something else. at some point i was wondering, if this woman is that beautiful and 'bewitching' how could a man let go of her. all my heart ache was healed by the revelation that this woman is but a fantasy.
beautiful creation, keep it coming |
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Re: An Illusory Love
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 25th May 2010 @ 07:40:03 AM AEST
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| so real yet just a dream. a really brilliant desciptive piece of writing. look forward to more. |
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Re: An Illusory Love
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 25th May 2010 @ 09:00:07 AM AEST
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| Must I bid farewell to this moment of serenity, the combination of fantasy world and reality interwoven in one long dream of not wanting to wake up..... none of this is real,creative sensual write that drifts away like the dream. |
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Re: An Illusory Love
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by Nevilleconnie on
Tuesday, 25th May 2010 @ 09:06:25 AM AEST
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| This poem was brilliant!! I absolutely loved it. I loved the ending of this poem, even though it was sad. Great job!! |
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Re: An Illusory Love
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by teal0star0aurora on
Saturday, 12th June 2010 @ 04:55:19 AM AEST
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Very nice.
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Re: An Illusory Love
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by Lionheart89 on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 06:39:10 PM AEST
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| Wow, really described how I feel most of the time, just wandering in my mind with all those illusions. Beautiful how you worked towards the ending. |
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Re: An Illusory Love
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 17th May 2014 @ 05:48:13 PM AEST
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Excellent title for this excellent read!
Thanks for sharing! |
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