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Summer City Evening
Contributed by
dthomas89
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Wednesday, 26th May 2010 @ 01:33:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I work the graveyard
So my commute begins at nine
But its 80 degrees in Boston
So I'm feeling kinda fine
As I wait for my train
I smell something in the air
Good old subway popcorn
Reminds of the fair
I'm a waiting a few minutes
Cause the last train I missed
I see the heat of the tracks
And I've stepped in somones *****
The train as no AC
So there is sweat on my brow
The heat is getting to me
Only two stops now
The couples are dining
And the lonely men lurk
The city comes to life
While I'm going to work
Work is busy
And I had no warning
I can't wait to see
My summer city morning
dthomas89 PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit. Additionally, this does not apply to commenting on your own poem "Sitting and Thinking" and insulting other members of this site. Personal attacks and insults will not be tolerated at YPDC. Copy and paste this link into your browser on what Mick, the owner of this site, has to say about personal attacks.
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Your comment on Sitting and Thinking has been removed. Demanding comments when you are not willing to offer comments on our other member's poems? By any chance, do you see any contradiction in that?
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Re: Summer City Evening
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by iodinelove on
Wednesday, 9th June 2010 @ 08:10:47 PM AEST
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Great job, Thanks for the read.
Always, abraham
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