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Twilight Under The Old Oak Tree
Contributed by
laststarontheleft
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Thursday, 27th May 2010 @ 08:55:02 AM in AEST
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x ~ x ~ x
Holding hands once more, they ambled....
Through memories and pastures green
Past the stream, toward the shade of the Old Oak Tree
He set down a blanket, and slowly sat....
Moulding his back into the warm, knowing bark
His gesturing gaze, inviting her to lay beside him
Then, resting her head upon his lap, he caressed her shoulder
A lock of silver hair tickled her cheek, as the soft breeze embraced their moment
The tranquility of Mother Nature's opus
Soothed away every care, every line....
Whilst the bountiful meadow, Alive and untouched
Danced across the reflections in their eyes
Above them, the love heart with their initials, like an epitaph, carved into the bark
Whence childhood sweethearts they became....
With subtle breath, inhaling the delicate wisdom of nature's engulfing abode
Smiling together, they sighed..........
Then fell upon a sweet, eternal slumber
At One, At Peace, At Last.....
x ~ x ~ x
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Re: Twilight Under The Old Oak Tree
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th May 2010 @ 11:09:08 AM AEST
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((((( You're back )))))
Wow, I don't know whether to smile or cry!! I did not expect that ending. Oh, and freaking great imagery.
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Re: Twilight Under The Old Oak Tree
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 27th May 2010 @ 03:38:20 PM AEST
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| Tim's excited and so am I welcome back my friend and what a piece to come back with,warm heartfelt, great imagery and an over all feel good factor beautifully written well done xx |
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Re: Twilight Under The Old Oak Tree
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 28th May 2010 @ 04:54:54 AM AEST
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this truely is poetry of the imagination. I love the deep meanings and sharp descriptions.
great stuff! |
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Re: Twilight Under The Old Oak Tree
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by spud on
Monday, 31st May 2010 @ 11:37:14 AM AEST
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Hi L,
Nice to see you writing again.
A warm and gentle little story that teaches us
that the power and endurance of love is ageless!
Tommy
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Re: Twilight Under The Old Oak Tree
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by emystar on
Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 06:18:34 PM AEST
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Very touching write.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Twilight Under The Old Oak Tree
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th April 2014 @ 02:30:46 AM AEST
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sadly beautiful, a fabulous write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Twilight Under The Old Oak Tree
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 27th July 2020 @ 06:23:05 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written..............awesome |
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