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VI. For Those Who Never Turned Their Head
Contributed by
omeoteotl
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Thursday, 27th May 2010 @ 02:15:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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a.
For those who never turned their head
Let the weapon sway slightly
In hope of return.
You have missed a multi-scene
Of your kind
In freezing posture
Intercontinental
And known.
b. a delicacy
Strange opportunity
Glowing among shadows in white light
And grazing like insane horses
Free in their asylums.
For those who never looked to see,
What they have missed
Are senses of the superior
Unnaturally in stalking mist.
c. sick head
The abyss will grow like castles around you.
Last shot of the year like this
And slowly
Seconds of pleasure
Resign to night fall.
Where all is surrounding in crystal
Confined
To memory.
Glory was never sanctioned here by god.
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Re: VI. For Those Who Never Turned Their Head
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 27th May 2010 @ 07:20:07 PM AEST
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Beautiful. A breath of fresh air.
always, abraham |
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Re: VI. For Those Who Never Turned Their Head
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by Aspirant on
Saturday, 29th May 2010 @ 06:23:28 AM AEST
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| Excellent. Very appealing in its imaginative simplicity . |
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Re: VI. For Those Who Never Turned Their Head
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by Nova on
Tuesday, 27th July 2010 @ 10:16:46 AM AEST
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This is really excellent. I see intricacies that my mind is thoroughly enjoying toying with and spinning.
Thank you~ |
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