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~***~ Beneath The Shine ~***~
Contributed by
wordpoet
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Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I think back now to times gone by, when everything was new,
And all the things we shared back then, the moments quickly flew.
Wed make excuses just to see and touch each others face,
With gentle hands to warm the heart, Id melt in your embrace.
Laughter was so common, like sweet music to my ears,
And the way that you would smile at me erased all of my fears.
It was then that you would long for me and want me by your side,
While the things you said to others told me plainly of your pride.
But now the new has worn off, the lusters gone away,
And with all the things that once were told, theres not much more to say.
Too many times were busy with a world we call our own,
While on the battlefield of human pride our love is hardly shown.
But now and then you grace me with a sparkle in your eye,
A smile or a loving touch, and my heart lets out a cry,
This is what Im longing for, if only it would last,
Then the present wouldnt have to go and turn into the past
Yet the more I think about it, the more I realize,
Youve helped me face lifes burdens, no matter what the size.
And when I needed someone, to be the perfect friend,
You gave me strength in loving hope and stayed until the end.
So its true the lusters faded but its easier to see,
Theres steel that lies beneath the shine, binding you and me.
I know now when its over, that one thing will stay new,
And thats the never ending love that I feel inside for you.
By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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Re: ~***~ Beneath The Shine ~***~
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 04:38:23 AM AEST
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a heart felt piece...you show love beautifully in your work...
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Re: ~***~ Beneath The Shine ~***~
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by spooky on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 05:12:14 AM AEST
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| beautifullt written,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: ~***~ Beneath The Shine ~***~
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 07:00:30 AM AEST
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| sweet:) hugs nessa |
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Re: ~***~ Beneath The Shine ~***~
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by gina on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 10:32:02 AM AEST
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so very cute......:full of love, i liked it a lot really
GINA |
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Re: ~***~ Beneath The Shine ~***~
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by wordsy on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 11:37:51 AM AEST
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A well worded weaving.
wordsy. |
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Re: ~***~ Beneath The Shine ~***~
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 08:40:35 AM AEST
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| This is so true Doug ... a very realistic write about relationships .... and so well written, as always .... Jan |
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Re: ~***~ Beneath The Shine ~***~
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 03:05:08 PM AEST
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Beautiful.... This is a lovely peice... Thank you for sharing it.
YS |
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Re: ~***~ Beneath The Shine ~***~
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by Lia on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 11:52:33 PM AEST
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| Oh my..this is absolutely precious. I have often felt the need and longing to have my marriage start over again, just so I could feel all giddy like a lil kid again. It's amazing how it all fades away once familiarity sets in... |
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Re: ~***~ Beneath The Shine ~***~
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 04:10:52 PM AEST
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| Gave it five. Great poem |
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Re: ~***~ Beneath The Shine ~***~
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by Wilder on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 02:41:37 PM AEST
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| That's so sweet :o) i liked it. |
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