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Passing Storm
Contributed by
Feelin_Like_A_Sadfellow
on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Patriotic
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Passing Storm
You see them walk out the door
It was only yesterday, they were on all four
Trying your hardest, to keep the rain from falling down
The heavy clouds let go
Our sons and daughters are gone
Your fathers and mothers too
Theyve left you home, safely at home
Try not to cry, everything is going to be alright
It wont be long before theyre home
All alone, feeling so cold, in a place you call home
Seems like all is in despair
When you can only think about them over there
Someday, the suns going to come back
Its going to shine down, on you and me
When that day comes, well see
The storm has gone, it has passed by, your hearts feeling high
The grass has dried and all the rain has gone away
Youve been waiting for this day, to say I love you
To see the one that you love
Youve waited and waited a while
Your hearts racing so many miles
No sign of them, the one that you care for
You think this cant be
I need you, the one that I love
Where is, the one that I love
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Re: Passing Storm
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 04:34:00 AM AEST
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a beautiful but sad write...very touching
kara |
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Re: Passing Storm
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by spooky on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 05:25:51 AM AEST
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| they say,,that there's someone for everyone,,beautifully written,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: Passing Storm
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 11:14:45 AM AEST
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| this line stands out to me,"All alone, feeling so cold, in a place you call home"... shows me the longing and wishing for that love to return, for the brighter days to return, for life's storm to be past, but has the loved one died? im a little confused on that, gives me something to ponder, thank you for sharing this poem, hugs nessa |
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Re: Passing Storm
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 03:04:08 PM AEST
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i left that part of the poem blurry for a reason... when our soldiers leave for war their loved ones are always wishing them to come home... and when it is time for them to come home and they don't return it leaves the ones at home filled with many questions on what possiblly happened... when you were a little confused with the ending you felt exactly what those who are missing loved ones felt...
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