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Trust
Contributed by
Grace_and_Glory
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Saturday, 29th May 2010 @ 12:58:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Innocents is captivating
Exultant in light
Pure freedom a foundation
I trust
I fly through the air
My daddy will catch me
Strong arms extended
I trust
His hands never far from reach
He holds an unbroken stare
Unbridled laughter
I trust
Unrestricted pleasure
Your joy is contagious
Jovial my treasure
I trust
Delight of my heart
Your beautiful daughter forever
Youve crowned in gentle grace
I trust
Your gaze penetrates my fears
Longingly you love me
Freely I love you back
I trust
Faith like a child
Is what you ask of me now
In liberty Ill fly
I trust
Copyright 2009 Danielle K. Griner
Copyright ©
Grace_and_Glory
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2010-05-29 12:58:30]
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Re: Trust
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by jenniferstein2006 on
Saturday, 29th May 2010 @ 01:18:40 PM AEST
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Re: Trust
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th May 2010 @ 11:29:20 PM AEST
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I am not always big on repetition like that but it seemed to work with this one. Me likes. I also like that you structured this one in stanzas. That's just a personal thing for me though. It's your poetry so obviously you should do what you want. It's just easier for me to read that way and then it makes it flow easier...for me.
This had a very gentle trusting feeling to it. 
Thank you,
Tim
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