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elegant tiger
Contributed by
rambo56
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Sunday, 30th May 2010 @ 06:37:31 AM in AEST
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the elegance of the tiger
so beautiful is he
roaming in the wild
wonderful and free
stalking in the grass waiting for his prey
treading very softly as it comes his way
silently he moves it is such a thrill
then begins the chase and finally the kill.
then he sits and holds it in between his claws
slowly as he eats it in between his jaws
then he takes a nap to sleep his food away
and for the tiger its been the perfect day.
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Re: elegant tiger
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by Nevilleconnie on
Sunday, 30th May 2010 @ 07:53:39 AM AEST
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| This is really good. I can easily see in my mind, the stalking tiger. you put such great details into your poems. Keep on writing!! |
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Re: elegant tiger
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by hanasuru on
Sunday, 30th May 2010 @ 03:37:38 PM AEST
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Another good one.
I'd really like to hear you write about children. I have a feeling your warm style would be really fitting for that topic. |
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Re: elegant tiger
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by joe-joe on
Friday, 11th June 2010 @ 01:03:14 PM AEST
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| very nice write... sometimes nature can teach us the simplicity of life... |
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