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Febuary 14th
Contributed by
Written2bRead
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Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
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I don't want you/to ever feel pain
I wish I could take it all away
Like in/perfect stories
with happy endings
where everything turns out ok
But an angel's eyes look down,
and an angel's tear falls to the ground
I wish I could erase the scars
but I can only hold you...
in my arms
don't slip into silence again
don't lose your smile again
there's something to live for, I'm sure
you're worth living for to me
If I could mend one heart that had fallen apart
If that one could be you
You're everything, that means everything- to me
will your expectations ever be met?
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Re: Febuary 14th
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by AngryPrincess on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 10:32:54 AM AEST
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(((Jared))) Like I said the very first time I read it...and everytime since then...its beautiful, its amazing...i LOVE it! The few poems of your i've read have been some of the best poems i've ever seen. :O)
Lindsey ;O) |
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Re: Febuary 14th
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by psyonara on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 05:03:40 PM AEST
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| very well written. you express your feelings in a way i understand very well. k, i guess i've been in the exact situation before, but it's still an excellent poem! good work! Helmut :+> |
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Re: Febuary 14th
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by Trisha on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 09:09:59 PM AEST
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| I like this and I wouldn't mind saying this is really good |
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