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fill the world with children
Contributed by
rambo56
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Monday, 31st May 2010 @ 07:11:17 AM in AEST
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fill the world with child so they can bring a smile
just to watch there faces makes life seem worthwhile
watch them as they play as happy as can be
doing just what children do making life feel free
watch them as they sleep safely in there bed
think about there future that they have ahead
just watch them as they grow each and everyday
fill the world with children so happiness will stay
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2010-05-31 07:11:17]
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Re: fill the world with children
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 31st May 2010 @ 08:42:25 AM AEST
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great sentiments! and a nicely flowing
poem. well done. |
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Re: fill the world with children
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by fish on
Monday, 31st May 2010 @ 09:56:32 AM AEST
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how beautifully you have compressed a broad title into a few lines. sweet flow and rhymes. your poem is about the sweetest thing to read right now.
i think your first line has a typo error, the 'child' there should be in plural.
aside this i think your poem is great.
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Re: fill the world with children
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by Cliche on
Monday, 31st May 2010 @ 02:13:26 PM AEST
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| Nice feeling. I'll get on it right now. Haha. Really though - beautiful. |
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