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river dream
Contributed by
rambo56
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Monday, 31st May 2010 @ 08:54:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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i went down to the river to watch the water flow rolling there so peaceful rolling nice and slow watched it as rolled down in to the stream then i closed my eyes and i began to dream i dreamed of a waterfall as clear as can be in a land of beauty where i felt so free i wandered into pastures with valleys oh so green where everything was tranquil and made me feel serene there was lots of mountains reaching to the sky with lots of little bluebirds flying near by this was just dream a vision that i saw but i will dream again so i can go again once more
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Re: river dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 1st June 2010 @ 06:32:13 AM AEST (User
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I love the flow of water and the insperation
of the mountains. this is well written and very
descriptive. |
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