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Rotting Inside
Contributed by
Chipotleaway
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Monday, 31st May 2010 @ 10:54:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Rotting Inside
He acts happy,
Not a care in the world,
Fine at the moment,
Loving to relive the good times,
Laughing at jokes that arent funny,
Is rotting inside,
Caring for every last moment,
Hating every moment,
Wanting to relive, but not able,
No joke worth listening,
Wanting it to just be over.
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2010-05-31 22:54:41]
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Re: Rotting Inside
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by xXInkInMyVeinsXx on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2010 @ 09:45:26 AM AEST
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| The emotion comes across really well. Good job! |
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Re: Rotting Inside
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by bombBananaboom on
Tuesday, 29th June 2010 @ 10:03:29 PM AEST
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| Nice work v.v But I can't help but think you need a hug! |
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