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eskimo tale
Contributed by
rambo56
on
Tuesday, 1st June 2010 @ 11:12:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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there was a little eskimo
his home was made of ice
he was very kind and very very nice
he walked along the ice looking for a hole
trying to catch a fish with his little pole
one day when he was fishing he saw a penguin cry
the eskimo went over and he asked him why
i have lost my way he said i drifted of my track
dont worry said the eskimo i will take you back
the eskimo was clever and new is way around
and took the penguin back to his penguin ground
penguin he was happy he was now back home
he said goodbye to eskimo and never again did roam
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Re: eskimo tale
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by fish on
Tuesday, 1st June 2010 @ 09:37:37 PM AEST
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i love every bit of this poem.
quickly, is there a typo on line ten?
this is a great piece i love it |
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Re: eskimo tale
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by ExoM on
Tuesday, 1st June 2010 @ 10:09:05 PM AEST
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| Oh i really really loved this poem! Its really simple and reminds me of when my mom used to read to me when I was a little girl. Really enjoyable poem :) |
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Re: eskimo tale
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2010 @ 03:20:25 AM AEST
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| yes, i love this poem too. so well written and the way it flows is great. more please! |
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Re: eskimo tale
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th June 2010 @ 05:12:08 AM AEST
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| cool lol |
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