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Disbelief
Contributed by
prophet
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Wednesday, 2nd June 2010 @ 07:22:00 AM in AEST
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I dont believe you
I dont believe the way you talk
I dont believe the way you see
& I dont believe this is the best you can be
All this confusion running through my head
There is one thing I do believe
That I am not the one at fault
I am not the one who lied
I am not the one who cheated
And I am not the one who ran
I loved you
and you left me with th one thing i hate
Disbelief
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Re: Disbelief
(User Rating: 1 )
by xXInkInMyVeinsXx on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2010 @ 09:24:26 AM AEST
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| Wow! Really powerful poem. I really love it! |
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Re: Disbelief
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2010 @ 02:56:27 PM AEST
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trust...probably the most important element in a relationship, and often hard to give all of it.
i can sense how betrayed u feel in such a brief poem...
take care
-K.Z. |
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