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cumbrian tragedy
Contributed by
rambo56
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Thursday, 3rd June 2010 @ 10:05:03 AM in AEST
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a tragedy in cumbria happened yesterday
someone with a gun just taking lives away
shooting at the public in a state of stress
taking so much life leaving such a mess
people who had families and a loved one lost
taking lives at random was a madmans cost
he left a town so shattered all its peace as gone
so say a little prayer to help them carry on r.i.p
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2010-06-03 10:05:03]
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Re: cumbrian tragedy
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by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2010 @ 10:44:38 AM AEST
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| well expressed and very welcome after such tragic events, well done. |
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Re: cumbrian tragedy
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by fish on
Thursday, 3rd June 2010 @ 10:58:18 AM AEST
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i just wish this is a poetic creation, it is really tragic.
speaking of poetry, this poem is beautiful. i love the presentation of the rhymes AABBCCDE. you rhymed the lines and left the last two open thus creating a feel i can't precisely explain. nice poem, i love it |
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