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Reaching
Contributed by
Jessi95
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Friday, 4th June 2010 @ 10:36:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Do you have hopes and Prayers?
That life will soon end?
Do you get that feeling?
That your heart will never mend?
As if living would make
The pain so much more
As if dying would just be
Like closing the door
The door of life
The door of hope
Its as if I am reaching up
But I cant find the rope
Its like no one cares
If I leave or not
Its as if I were to fall
I couldnt count on being caught
If I was to say that I love you
Would you hear me?
If I was to tell you how I felt
Would you set me free?
Im not sure anymore
What I really need
All I know is that Im sitting here
As my heart starts to bleed
I need a way to climb
Up the hill of pain
I am starting to slip
As down comes the rain
Then I suddenly see a hand
As it reaches for me
Helping me up
Before I hit the sea
Does this mean
That you finally care?
I ask myself
As I breathe in the sweet air
Right now I dont even care
Because I dont feel the hurt
As I stand up
And brush off the dirt
Goodbye world of hurt
Hello my love so new
I guess the love is worth the pain
So what you said was true
Copyright ©
Jessi95
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2010-06-04 22:36:59]
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Re: Reaching
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by haymanali on
Saturday, 5th June 2010 @ 03:38:20 AM AEST
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Goodbye world of hurt
Hello my love so new
I guess the love is worth the pain
So what you said was true
Melodious verses. And final stanza is wonderful.
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