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Your intoxicating smile
Contributed by
Haymanali
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Thursday, 10th June 2010 @ 07:15:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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These lonely love violins
vibrating and moaning
over the sweet sadness
of wine-colored evenings
veiling your warm smiles
that softly intoxicate me
agonize in the blind horizon
of your innocent absence
omnipresent in every season
unconsciously inside of me
Copyright ©
Haymanali
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2010-06-10 07:15:37]
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Re: Your intoxicating smile
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by spud on
Thursday, 10th June 2010 @ 12:09:46 PM AEST
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Hi,
Beautifully versed in the softest remembrance of
what once was.
Tommy
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Re: Your intoxicating smile
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by Cayleigh-Chan on
Saturday, 12th June 2010 @ 11:06:45 AM AEST
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For such a small poem,
it is very strong
and able to get your point across in such beautiful, few words.
I love it!
-Cayleigh |
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Re: Your intoxicating smile
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by deepviolet on
Monday, 14th June 2010 @ 06:50:06 PM AEST
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| i connect with your meaning in this poem (at least, my meaning), remembering small gestures long after a loved one has left. i keep the same sort of mental pictures, and i think you did a fantastic job describing yours and communicating the feelings to the reader. great poem! |
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