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When Love Came
Contributed by
voyage
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Thursday, 10th June 2010 @ 09:59:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The time we spent together
You've showed me love in all.
Some little things we differ
They matter not at all.
I've tried to make you see me
For who I really am
It feels like when you are near me
You are a greater man.
Perhaps it's an illusion,
Delusion, even trick
For me there's no confusion
Your love is pure and big.
I'll spend my lifetime trying
To show you what love is
And will kill myself trying
Because it won't decease.
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Re: When Love Came
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 10th June 2010 @ 10:02:53 PM AEST
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Great job, Thanks for the read.
Always, abraham
you do have a few spelling errors, just to let you know
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Re: When Love Came
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by Potpourri on
Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 08:34:02 AM AEST
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Beautiful work you have here,
love, does it not bring out the
best and at times, the worst in
us? this was a journey of true
and sincere beauty . . .
Thank you also for visiting my page,
i appreciate the conection shared in
our writing, thank you . . .
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